Feedback From Other Groups On The Rough Cut - The Not So Good Points

They are:

• The Fades and Dissolves could be smoother
• Can be seen as not very realistic
• More close up's of piano
• More effects need to be used
• Some more shot variety
• More close ups of Abi, hands and other things
• Use moving shot types
• Use Pan's and Tracks
• Make more of the fact that she has been dumped - key part of the narrative, significant when she is alone - Abi and Ed could be walking and Ed disappears
• Make some of the shots longer in their length going between narrative and piano
• Sometimes when Abi was just playing piano with no lyrics, she looked a bit bored, so could add additional footage to cover that or re film it
• Could be greater variety of shot types
• It was good!